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Wednesday, 12 October 2016

Cross country

Today we competed at strathallan school for cross country to have fun and try our best.The year 8 boys were up first and I felt hyped up with energy. we started running i jogged in the start be cause normally they sprint in the start and lose energy.I got to a point where i started coughing and slowed me down coughing felt like it drained all my energy.It felt like walking was my only option but I still felt like finishing the race. My highlight is trying my best even when i started feeling sick but I still finished and not mattering about coming first. My low light is nothing unless no one tried there best
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  1. Shayden16 November 2016 at 10:21

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  3. Shayden16 November 2016 at 11:05

    Cross Country:
    Hi Lelei, I really like your story. It has a lot of creativity, and a bit of expression added into it! :D

    What I found thoughtful in this story is that you added commas, full stops, etc.

    But you missed some things and i’ll tell you what you missed. Add a paragraph. Capital I, Add a capital after a full stop. But still, you did a great story! :)

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  4. Maulana dicka17 December 2016 at 14:21

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